在上一篇教育类话题文章中我们整理了教育类话题中已经归纳总结了教育类只涉及学生的话题：学生学什么以及学生怎么学习；以及应该如何破题，往往不外乎学习【academic performance】/健康【well-being】/职业发展【professional development】/个人成长【personal growth】四个角度；
相较托福写作， 雅思写作除了考察考生的语言写作水平之外，同时也会更加注重学生对于不同议题能不能有更多独立思考，因此会涉及更多有争议的社会话题；
所以雅思大作文的教育类话题，除了围绕论述受教育的主体——学生之外，也会涉及对教育过程中家长如何教育孩子以及政府/社会应该如何培养下一代的考察；
今天我们就会围绕涉及家长/监护人的话题，进行补充可以破题的思路；
雅思大作文话题：家庭教育
*代表题目:
👉1）原因+选边 父母高压对小孩 2021.10.30
Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. Why is the reason for doing that? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
👉2）双边 政府VS父母 送学生上学 2021.11.27
Some people say it is the government responsibility to transport children to school. While others believe parents should transport their children to school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
👉3）选边 家庭VS其他因素 对孩子的影响2021.06.05
The family has a great influence on children's development, but the influence outside the home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?
👉4）选边【从家人那里学到的价值观】 24年11月2日
The values that we learn from our parents and family have greater influence on our future success than knowledge and skills we learn at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
👉5）双边 孩子应该犯错VS大人应该避免他们的错误2021.08.07
Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
👉6）双边 该不该安排孩子们的自由时间 2024.01.06
Some people believe children should have organized activities in their free time. Others believe children should decide what to do in their free time on their own. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
【以上题目的具体思路会在赠送资料中完整呈现】
通过以上题目进行分析，总的来说围绕家长的教育类议题往往与家庭教育有关，但归根结底，还是家长应该用怎么样的方式教育自己的孩子，以及应该让孩子学什么；所以又可以套回到只涉及学生主体的破题，也就是考虑家长的教育方式能不能对孩子的学习/健康/职业发展/个人/个人成长能有效带来好处；
因此涉及家庭教育的破题一方面还是可以从学生出发，所选择的教育方式能不能有利于学生的：
学习成绩 academic performance
身心健康 well-being
未来职业发展 professional development
个人成长 personal growth
对于未成年人，还不能在社会中独立生活，以及孩子往往被家长认为是比较不成熟，lack self-displine and impluse control；
一方面，家长往往对孩子有这较高期待，并且总希望把最好的给自己的孩子；另一方面，孩子作为独立个体，自然有着自己的想法，或者是有自己的追求；二者则导致了父母与孩子最大矛盾点的来源，父母应该给予孩子多少的自由；
不像已经独立的成年人，孩子和家长关系的尴尬点在于孩子在这一阶段无论是精神还是物质都是依附于家长的，但是同时他们的自我意识也在觉醒，导致了双方观点的冲突；
因此如果涉及到家庭教育的题目我们还可以从对家长以及家庭两个角度出发 ；这种教育方式能不能有利于家长的：
生活质量 quality of life
身心健康 well-being
职业发展 professional development
以及能不能有利于形成
4. 更好的家庭氛围/关系（foster a positive family environment）
雅思大作文破题练习
原因+选边 父母高压对小孩 2021.10.30
Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children. Is this a positive or negative development for the children?
Positive Aspects【家长对孩子施加压力的好处】:
1. 有利于孩子的学习表现 academic performance
展开 原因 能为孩子提供 motivation and discipline
—> Moderate pressure can motivate children to work hard, develop discipline, and strive for their goals. It can help them build resilience and learn the value of effort and perseverance.
2. 有利于孩子未来的职业发展 professional development
展开 原因 能帮孩子 prepare for future challenges:
—> By setting high expectations, parents can help prepare their children for the challenges they will face in higher education and the competitive job market.
3. 有利于孩子的个人成长 personal growth
展开 原因 能帮孩子 develop a variety of skills
Pushing children to excel in various activities can help them develop a wide range of skills, including problem-solving, critical thinking, and time management.
Negative Aspects【家长对孩子施加压力的弊端】:
1. 不利于孩子的身心健康 well-being
展开 原因 高压会导致 mental health issues:
excessive pressure can lead to significant mental health issues in children, such as anxiety, depression, and stress-related disorders. the constant stress and fear of failure can negatively impact their overall well-being.
2. 不利于孩子的学习 academic performance
展开 原因 高压会影响学习效率 impaired learning efficiency
ironically, too much pressure can hinder a child's academic performance. the stress and anxiety can interfere with their ability to concentrate, retain information, and perform well on tests.
3. 不利于孩子的个人成长 personal growth
展开 原因 高压会限制孩子探索兴趣爱好 limited exploration of interests
when children are pressured to focus solely on academics or certain extracurricular activities, they may not have the opportunity to explore a wide range of interests and passions. this can prevent them from discovering their true talents and areas of enjoyment.
4. 不利于好的家庭环境的形成 【lead to a negative/toxic family environment 】
展开 原因 高压会影响亲子关系 strain the relationship
High levels of pressure cause resentment, lack of trust, and communication breakdown between parents and children. Children may feel that their parents value their achievements more than their personal happiness and well-being.
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